tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post2588497792948583562..comments2022-03-31T19:54:16.334+02:00Comments on Gedichten van Niels Blomberg: Magpie Tale 135: Venus and the sailor Niels Blomberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-33341314184570313392012-09-20T15:54:53.226+02:002012-09-20T15:54:53.226+02:00word verification? leavers? I understand the part ...word verification? leavers? I understand the part about the skyNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-88676662778849239432012-09-19T12:26:52.429+02:002012-09-19T12:26:52.429+02:00Nothing shipwrecked about your poem. :) Nice Mag.
...Nothing shipwrecked about your poem. :) Nice Mag.<br /><br /><br />But it took me FIVE goes to find a word verification I could read, let alone type! Can you not be kind to comment leavers and remove it? I promise, the sky won't fall in if you do!Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-59736820129114981342012-09-18T21:23:55.639+02:002012-09-18T21:23:55.639+02:00Thank you Sue
Thank you Sue<br />Niels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-74848469815913568322012-09-18T21:19:19.914+02:002012-09-18T21:19:19.914+02:00Thank you AnnThank you AnnNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-54830782707359982012012-09-18T21:15:28.626+02:002012-09-18T21:15:28.626+02:00Thank you MargaretThank you MargaretNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-45884668756043400402012-09-18T03:53:46.269+02:002012-09-18T03:53:46.269+02:00I am a bit afraid of "big" water, so I l...I am a bit afraid of "big" water, so I liked "loveless sea" and he ending is beautiful in its taking fear away. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-53128502485868170182012-09-18T03:21:48.345+02:002012-09-18T03:21:48.345+02:00How lovely that a dance reverses the dark aura of ...How lovely that a dance reverses the dark aura of the poem, the depression and lonliness you describe beautifully. I like your disciplined form, rhyme scheme and the near rhyme of "black" and "wreck".Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-56489332746764520112012-09-18T01:23:39.329+02:002012-09-18T01:23:39.329+02:00I quite liked this one. Thanks.
=)I quite liked this one. Thanks.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-91775983143519599062012-09-17T21:08:26.404+02:002012-09-17T21:08:26.404+02:00Thank you HelenThank you HelenNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-27712609757086822612012-09-17T21:08:03.571+02:002012-09-17T21:08:03.571+02:00Thank you BrianThank you BrianNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-36985477054555295632012-09-17T21:07:46.793+02:002012-09-17T21:07:46.793+02:00Thank you TessThank you TessNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-22522546924531773062012-09-17T21:00:31.086+02:002012-09-17T21:00:31.086+02:00Thank you MaryThank you MaryNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-62982343216508328442012-09-17T18:42:51.332+02:002012-09-17T18:42:51.332+02:00Lyrical, yes ... quite lovely as well.Lyrical, yes ... quite lovely as well.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-59288960738015374322012-09-17T01:30:14.737+02:002012-09-17T01:30:14.737+02:00i want more of this...very lyrical...i think you c...i want more of this...very lyrical...i think you could double it and make a great song...really great imagery as well....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-39695520984164934502012-09-17T00:31:07.309+02:002012-09-17T00:31:07.309+02:00The loveless sea...I never thought of the sea in t...The loveless sea...I never thought of the sea in this light before...very nice...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-81950235032994053572012-09-16T22:44:34.874+02:002012-09-16T22:44:34.874+02:00I particularly like your final couplet. Everyone ...I particularly like your final couplet. Everyone needs someone like that.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.com