tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post18041989720272041..comments2022-03-31T19:54:16.334+02:00Comments on Gedichten van Niels Blomberg: Magpie tale 82: HomeNiels Blomberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-20135524937032996132011-09-19T22:17:20.342+02:002011-09-19T22:17:20.342+02:00Thanks for the nice words,
Suz, thanks for the co...Thanks for the nice words,<br /><br />Suz, thanks for the comment; that was really helpfulNiels Blomberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06805731073334620488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-45860022144600073682011-09-19T04:11:58.026+02:002011-09-19T04:11:58.026+02:00awesome...awesome...Jingle Poetry At Olive Gardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14591535202657302861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-42567752903894976052011-09-18T15:48:12.028+02:002011-09-18T15:48:12.028+02:00I love the chilling repetitive first line. Well do...I love the chilling repetitive first line. Well done...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-14365648253260172262011-09-17T22:01:47.414+02:002011-09-17T22:01:47.414+02:00very interesting piece of writingvery interesting piece of writingChronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-17711532300641485412011-09-17T20:10:34.167+02:002011-09-17T20:10:34.167+02:00You used rhyme beautifully in this Mapgie!You used rhyme beautifully in this Mapgie!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-7122345869865832092011-09-16T02:29:21.735+02:002011-09-16T02:29:21.735+02:00amazing, well done.amazing, well done.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-1487556160673621422011-09-15T19:56:47.237+02:002011-09-15T19:56:47.237+02:00That's one way to deal with unwelcome visitors...That's one way to deal with unwelcome visitors! LOLCadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16184350413033668517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-77416584078754657082011-09-15T19:53:13.594+02:002011-09-15T19:53:13.594+02:00This a beautiful poem for the prompt Niels!
:-)This a beautiful poem for the prompt Niels!<br />:-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-32212940834196273972011-09-15T17:47:58.460+02:002011-09-15T17:47:58.460+02:00Simply beautiful!
Loved it!
an elusive world lur...Simply beautiful!<br /><br />Loved it!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/09/elusive-world-lurks.html" rel="nofollow">an elusive world lurks</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-46997245681335059402011-09-15T07:48:15.049+02:002011-09-15T07:48:15.049+02:00A refreshing view of the prompt, here. Well contr...A refreshing view of the prompt, here. Well controlled cadences in the verses.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-7308084079666299912011-09-15T00:17:47.971+02:002011-09-15T00:17:47.971+02:00A good take on this dark image, white notwithstand...A good take on this dark image, white notwithstanding! I like the strophic flow and rhyme you have used. The image prompted me to rhyme also...Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-89940474882951377482011-09-14T22:37:40.398+02:002011-09-14T22:37:40.398+02:00you have a good cadance going on here
not sure abo...you have a good cadance going on here<br />not sure about the last stanza...<br />"or to become my spouse"Suzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-14438224753142276822011-09-14T13:12:33.434+02:002011-09-14T13:12:33.434+02:00nice take sir!
JJRod'znice take sir!<br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8393076102132495715.post-65662703286986634332011-09-14T06:30:51.577+02:002011-09-14T06:30:51.577+02:00Interesting piece... love the flow of words, build...Interesting piece... love the flow of words, building to a turn unexpected.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.com